get some skills. you can't rhyme very well you should practice some more on your beats to as well as your rhymes. then make a new submission.
that kid cant rhyme at all. sorry but he needs to get some skills
im sure you put alot of effort into this song but it just sounds really repetitve. it could probably be in like the title screen of a shooter game or something but i dont see it becoming like a rap or anything. better luck next time.
i think its pretty well done and sounds nice. i actually might make a rap to it if you dont mind
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